Love And Color
I thought of color and came out with these two ryhming romantic love poems. The first one is about choosing a flower and what it typically signifies when we give someone a red rose.
A Red Rose
If I have to pick a color of a rose
Red it would have to be for it shows
A love that is deep and echoes
In a heart which holds someone close.
Like a stubborn flame that glows
Undying even when the wind blows
That is how for you my love flows
Signified by the single red stalk I chose.
This second romantic love poem is about the color of love with red typically being linked to passion. Apart from trying to make it ryhme, I have also attempted to play with the length of the lines to make it into a nice shape to give the poem a more special feel.
The Color Of Love
If love has a color
Let it be red and no other
For red means passion for a lover
Like how I feel for you since we got together
Heady and passionate kisses that nothing else matter
Many we have shared that made nights hotter
Waking up beside you the day after
I am tempted to whisper
I love you forever.
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Beautiful, intimate, and very visual! Thanks.
Very intimate.. and Red Hot in passion!
sweet and romantic, I think I like the first one’s better than the second
btw: the food ad on the right makes me enjoy the poem less, very odd looking food
You are in good company with this comparison. In case you aren’t familiar with it, thought you might enjoy this 1794 poem/song by Robert Burns:
My love is like a red, red rose
That’s newly sprung in June :
My love is like the melody
That’s sweetly played in tune.
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in love am I :
And I will love thee still, my dear,
Till a’ the seas gang dry.
Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun :
And I will love thee still, my dear,
While the sands o’ life shall run.
And fare thee weel, my only love,
And fare thee weel a while !
And I will come again, my love,
Thou’ it were ten thousand mile.
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Nicely done! The form of the second is so creative!
You had a lot of fun with this…and so did I. I like the way you shaped the word length to look like this.
Glad you joined in! I think both are truly romantic!
The second being more passionate.
You did a great job with both of them. That second one is a work of art with the shaping.
this one is the most hotest
2nd too hot really you should post more hot ones