By: star

star — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 00:09:28 +0000

Everyday I try and try But no matter what, I cant get past these lies,I wake up in the morning with hope in my heart But I go to bed with it torn apart You tell me your going to change and work hard But in reality, your not doing anything but leaving my heart scarred You cant even see how desperate I am, calling out to you, I scream out to you more and more each time But you reject it, you make my love feel like such a crime I thought we were going to be together, All I wanted was you forever I dont know where you went my love I keep searching but every time I get close, the more you shove I feel so alone, in the dark, crawling And each time I think im going to reach the light, im left again bawling Your the only person who ever made me feel complete,You used to be so caring, supportive, understanding, and sweet Now your inconsiderate and coldMe, you no longer have to hold
You really were the best thing that ever happened to me It used to never be just me and you, but we……………..
I hope all of it was worth it Because ill be forever drowning in my broken-hearted pit
I dont want to live my life with out you
But you gotta figure out what you need to do Ill always love you, until my last breath But your neglect is going to be the cause of my death

By: Christy

Christy — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 16:35:44 +0000

I honestly have to say that was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. In a world where so much is so destructive and cruel I have found hope in this writing tool. Thank you

By: way

way — Wed, 30 Dec 2009 11:24:50 +0000

wow,its cute and nice.

By: karen

karen — Thu, 24 Dec 2009 19:17:48 +0000

not much rhyming but it’s nice,cute

By: sarah

sarah — Tue, 18 Nov 2008 22:08:07 +0000

its good but i wish it rhymed a lil more. but i loved it

Comments on: Short Rhyming Romantic Love Poem

By: star

By: Christy

By: way

By: karen

By: sarah